Need an Opinion

A lifetime in a boring corner
And, all I have to do is see
But I refuse to believe
That life is what we have to live


It’s what we have to give
And I, I can’t begin to stress
The feelings that I hold right now
The feelings that I can’t repress

And I’m here to give you
And I’m here to say
That dealing is the only way
‘Cause life, it keeps going on
When it’s going all wrong
And you can’t delay

Overtaken by the shadows of night
Overtaken by constant surprises
And yet, it all seems so fake
And I can’t begin to state
That living is the only way

A lifetime in a boring corner
All you have to do is see
But you refuse to believe


I need an opinion on this. Post them here.

I think it was nice.

nice poem you got there landon

was that yours?it was pretty good

Malaikvavit wrote:

I lol'd.

Not bad, a nice poem overall.

It was OK i guess. im not sure.